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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. foundation day 2. hit the shower 3. unprofessional 4. high standard 5. time wasted 1. Happily, my university\'s foundation day is today. See you tomorrow! 2. He will have hit the shower until noon. 3. The definition of \'unprofessional\' is what you are being now. Please admit your fault. 4. The main principal of the Amazon\'s management is pursuing high standards. 5. The days when I have spent in my university are completely the time wasted.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean



1. foundation day 
2. hit the shower 
3. unprofessional 
4. high standard 
5. time wasted 

1. Happily, my university\'s foundation day is today. See you tomorrow!
>> Happily, we celebrated our university\'s foundation day today. See you tomorrow!

2. He will have hit the shower until noon.
>> He will have hit the shower at noon. 
>> or: I\'ll hit the shower after jogging. 

3. The definition of \'unprofessional\' is what you are being now. Please admit your fault.
>> correct 

4. The main principal of the Amazon\'s management is pursuing high standards.
>> The main principle of Amazon\'s management is pursuing high standards.

5. The days when I have spent in my university are completely the time wasted.
>> The days that I have spent in my university are completely time wasted. 

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