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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. stuff 2. light meal 3. heavy meal 4. nutritionist 5. debut 1. Before you leave, please check all your stuffs are with you 2. She normally perfers a light meal as a dinner. 3. However, if she has had a bad day, she has a very heavy meal as a dinner. 4. When I was a high school student, my school nutritionist was awful. Sorry for her, but her dismissal was resonable. 5. One of my friend debuted as a Korean country music idol. His stage name was \'Pino\' from \'Pinocchio\'. Of course, he has gone just in a year.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. stuff 
2. light meal 
3. heavy meal 
4. nutritionist
5. debut 

1. Before you leave, please check all your stuffs are with you
>> Before you leave, please make sure all your stuff are with you. 


2. She normally perfers a light meal as a dinner.
>> She normally prefers to have a light meal for dinner. 


3. However, if she has had a bad day, she has a very heavy meal as a dinner.
>> However, if she had a bad day, she would have a heavy meal for dinner. 


4. When I was a high school student, my school nutritionist was awful. Sorry for her, but her dismissal was resonable.
>> When I was a high school student, my school nutritionist was awful. I felt sorry about her dismissal, but I think it was justified. 


5. One of my friend debuted as a Korean country music idol. His stage name was \'Pino\' from \'Pinocchio\'. Of course, he has gone just in a year.

>> One of my friends debuted as a Korean country singer. His stage name was \'Pino\' from Pinocchio. As expected, his music career lasted for a year only. 

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