05.14 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you are going to choose between past, present and future what will you choose and why?
I will choose past. I want to go back to when I am middle school student.
Because I regret in chosing high school, and if I am in middle school I would go another high school.
And I also would study English more.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mandy:)
Thank you so much and please check your corrections below^^
I will choose past. I want to go back to when I am middle school student.
>> I will choose the past because I want to go back to when I was still a middle school student.
Because I regret in chosing high school, and if I am in middle school I would go another high school.
>> Because I regret that I choose to be a high school immediately, and if I am going to attend a middle school before I would go to another high school.
And I also would study English more.
>> And I also I would study English more.
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