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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. To tell you a little bit more 2. As a result, I ended up with 3. unaware 4. overdo 5. Because of that, I suffered from 1. To tell you a little bit more when it comes to a rabbit, it shall have its stools. Have a good time with your bunny! :) 2. As a result, I ended up with your mom. That was how I met your mother. 3. He was unaware his plams had been sweaty. 4. As you will all probably already know, you might be overdoing now. 5. Because of that, I suffered from your mom. Son, you might want to remember it.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean




1. To tell you a little bit more
2. As a result, I ended up with
3. unaware
4. overdo 
5. Because of that, I suffered from 

1. To tell you a little bit more when it comes to a rabbit, it shall have its stools. Have a good time with your bunny! :)
>> To tell you a little bit more about rabbits, it shall have its stools. Have a good time with your bunny! 

2. As a result, I ended up with your mom. That was how I met your mother.
>> correct

3. He was unaware his plams had been sweaty.
>> He was unaware that his palms had been sweaty. 

4. As you will all probably already know, you might be overdoing now.
>> As you all probably already know, you might be overdoing things now. 

5. Because of that, I suffered from your mom. Son, you might want to remember it.
>> Because of that, I suffered at the hands of your mom. Son, you might want to remember it.


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