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학생이 쓴 원문
1. prolonged
2. diminished
3. consulted a doctor
4. severe pain
5. thanks to that experience
1. One of the prolonged tendency of modern art is avant-grade attempts.
2. Undauntedly his diminished position, he never compromises his principles.
3. To get a plastic surgery, she consulted a doctor.
4. The doctor said, the surgery may include severe pains but general anesthesia will be not allowed for her health reasons. Only local anesthesia will be performed.
5. Thanks to that experience, she resultingly renounced her bad habits.
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2. diminished
3. consulted a doctor
4. severe pain
5. thanks to that experience
1. One of the prolonged tendency of modern art is avant-grade attempts.
>> One of the prolonged tendencies of modern art is avant-garde attempts.
2. Undauntedly his diminished position, he never compromises his principles.
>> Undaunted by his low position, he never compromised his principles.
3. To get a plastic surgery, she consulted a doctor.
>> correct
4. The doctor said, the surgery may include severe pains but general anesthesia will be not allowed for her health reasons. Only local anesthesia will be performed.
>> The doctor said, the surgery may include severe pains but general anaesthesia will be not allowed for her health reasons. Only local anaesthesia will be given.
5. Thanks to that experience, she resultingly renounced her bad habits.
>> Thanks to that experience, she renounced her bad habits.
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