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Hi, Mandy ^^

You are very amazing :)

I am very happy that you want to do that if you will one of the most influential person in Korea.

I am very impressed.

Anyways Please check your corrections below

I want to teach them what is korean culture and also want to rest in here freely.

>> I want to teach them what Korean culture is and also I want them to rest in here freely.

 Business is the most important thing as well, but It is also important to know this country.

>> Business is one of the most important thing here as well, but it is also important to know this country.

 If I am the most influential person, I will treat foreigners by introducing many korean traditional culture.
>> If I am the most influential person, I will treat the foreigners by introducing many Korean traditional cultures.

 I will show them the K-pop first, and also cook korean food like [이름]chi-Jjigae and Gukbop.

>>  I will show them about the K-pop or Hallyu first, and also to cook a Korean food like [이름]chi-Jjigae and Gukbop.