05-17

2019-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. failure to 2. threat of 3. to tell you a little bit more 4. advised to 5. I ended up with 1. We cannot hide our disappointment in your failure to keep a promise. 2. South Korea isn\'t a safe zone anymore from a threat of a terrorism. 3. I feel tired when you say \'to tell you a little bit more\'. You should know how to stop talking. 4. My doctor advised to stay hydrated. If I will have felt thirsty, that is already late. 5. I ended up with buying a car. I know I already have lots of debts but I can\'t walk when report for work anymore.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean




1. failure to 
2. threat of 
3. to tell you a little bit more
4. advised to 
5. I ended up with 

1. We cannot hide our disappointment in your failure to keep a promise.
>> correct

2. South Korea isn\'t a safe zone anymore from a threat of a terrorism.
>> South Korea isn\'t a safe zone anymore from the threats of terrorism.

3. I feel tired when you say \'to tell you a little bit more\'. You should know how to stop talking.
>>   I feel tired when you say, \'to tell you a little bit more\'. You should know when to stop talking.

4. My doctor advised to stay hydrated. If I will have felt thirsty, that is already late.
>> My doctor advised me to stay hydrated. If I felt thirsty, that would be already late. 

5. I ended up with buying a car. I know I already have lots of debts but I can\'t walk when report for work anymore.
>> I ended up buying a car. I know that I already have a huge debt, but I can\'t walk to work anymore. 

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·