05-21
학생이 쓴 원문
1. almost everyone
2. mine is
3. immature
4. earnest
5. closed-minded
1. When BTS debuted, almost everyone laughed at thier childish group name.
2. Almost everyone brought their mothers\'s heartful lunch boxes. Mine was just full of dollar.
3. He protested his parents\' decision to move to a cheeper house. Now he regretes his immature behaviour in the time.
4. She is the most earnest person in her firm but she wasn\'t promoted again.
5. Don\'t be so closed-minded! They are just men exactly like us.
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. almost everyone
2. mine is
3. immature
4. earnest
5. closed-minded
1. When BTS debuted, almost everyone laughed at thier childish group name.
>> When BTS debuted, almost everyone laughed at their childish group name.
2. Almost everyone brought their mothers\'s heartful lunch boxes. Mine was just full of dollar.
>> Almost everyone brought lunch boxes that are full of their mother\'s love. Mine was just full of dollars.
3. He protested his parents\' decision to move to a cheeper house. Now he regretes his immature behaviour in the time.
>> He protested against his parents\' decision to move to a cheaper house. Now, he regrets his immature behaviour at that time.
4. She is the most earnest person in her firm but she wasn\'t promoted again.
>> She is the most earnest person in her firm, but she wasn\'t promoted again.
5. Don\'t be so closed-minded! They are just men exactly like us.
>> correct
2. mine is
3. immature
4. earnest
5. closed-minded
1. When BTS debuted, almost everyone laughed at thier childish group name.
>> When BTS debuted, almost everyone laughed at their childish group name.
2. Almost everyone brought their mothers\'s heartful lunch boxes. Mine was just full of dollar.
>> Almost everyone brought lunch boxes that are full of their mother\'s love. Mine was just full of dollars.
3. He protested his parents\' decision to move to a cheeper house. Now he regretes his immature behaviour in the time.
>> He protested against his parents\' decision to move to a cheaper house. Now, he regrets his immature behaviour at that time.
4. She is the most earnest person in her firm but she wasn\'t promoted again.
>> She is the most earnest person in her firm, but she wasn\'t promoted again.
5. Don\'t be so closed-minded! They are just men exactly like us.
>> correct
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