05.21 homework

2018-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What advice would you give to an older person who wants to feel young? You can feel young through exercise. It is very important to manage staying physically fit and health care. You also can feel young through thesedays trend. If you fit your clothes and hair trendly, you can naturally feel better than before. Nowadays, It is also important to search internet something trendy.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mandy^^

Thank you so much and you did a great job answering your homework:)

Please check your corrections below! ^_~

You can feel young through exercise.

>> Correct!

It is very important to manage staying physically fit and health care.
>> It is very important to manage staying physically fit and our health

You also can feel young through thesedays trend.
>> You can also feel young through these days trend.

If you fit your clothes and hair trendly, you can naturally feel better than before. Nowadays, It is also important to search internet something trendy.

>> If you will wear your clothes and hair trendy, you can naturally feel better than before. Nowadays, It is also important to search in the internet which is something trendy.

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