05-22
학생이 쓴 원문
1. manage to
2. tedious
3. for instance
4. opponent
5. a __ results in
1. To confront with reality, she had managed to take herself out from the alcoholism.
2. He was one of the most tedious professors in my university, but contemplating his lectures deeply, those were actually great.
3. She gave her efforts to keep in mind what she decided. For instance, she pinned a statement by Francis Bacon to her darkroom door to keep conscious of her own principles.
4. He easily gives his opponent the slip in his field without any specific endeavors.
5. A single rotten apple in a box can result in making other fresh apples go bad.
강사 첨삭
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1. manage to
2. tedious
3. for instance
4. opponent
5. a __ results in
1. To confront with reality, she had managed to take herself out from the alcoholism.
>> To face reality, she managed to get herself sober.
2. He was one of the most tedious professors in my university, but contemplating his lectures deeply, those were actually great.
>> He was one of the most tedious professors in my university, but contemplating about his lectures, those were actually great.
3. She gave her efforts to keep in mind what she decided. For instance, she pinned a statement by Francis Bacon to her darkroom door to keep conscious of her own principles.
>> She did everything so as to not forget her goal. For instance, she pinned a statement by Francis Bacon on her darkroom door to always remember her own principles.
4. He easily gives his opponent the slip in his field without any specific endeavors.
>> He easily gives his opponent in his field the slip. [I modified your sentence as I don\'t know what you\'re trying to say.]
5. A single rotten apple in a box can result in making other fresh apples go bad.
>> A single rotten apple in a box may result in the rest of the apples going bad.
2. tedious
3. for instance
4. opponent
5. a __ results in
1. To confront with reality, she had managed to take herself out from the alcoholism.
>> To face reality, she managed to get herself sober.
2. He was one of the most tedious professors in my university, but contemplating his lectures deeply, those were actually great.
>> He was one of the most tedious professors in my university, but contemplating about his lectures, those were actually great.
3. She gave her efforts to keep in mind what she decided. For instance, she pinned a statement by Francis Bacon to her darkroom door to keep conscious of her own principles.
>> She did everything so as to not forget her goal. For instance, she pinned a statement by Francis Bacon on her darkroom door to always remember her own principles.
4. He easily gives his opponent the slip in his field without any specific endeavors.
>> He easily gives his opponent in his field the slip. [I modified your sentence as I don\'t know what you\'re trying to say.]
5. A single rotten apple in a box can result in making other fresh apples go bad.
>> A single rotten apple in a box may result in the rest of the apples going bad.
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