05.23 homework
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If you are going to travel in a one place where it will be and why?
If l go to one place now, I want to go Boston, USA.
Boston is in seaside, so there is famous for grilled robster dishes and salmon steak.
In Boston, there is different seafood dishes from Korea.
And also I really like to eat seafood.
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Hi. Mandy:)
Please check your corrections below^^
If l go to one place now, I want to go Boston, USA.
>> If l am going to a place right now, I want to go Boston, USA.
Boston is in seaside, so there is famous for grilled robster dishes and salmon steak.
>> I want to visit Boston specially the seaside because there is a famous restaurant for grilled lobster dishes and salmon steak.
In Boston, there is different seafood dishes from Korea.
>> At Boston there are different kinds of seafood dishes from Korea.
And also I really like to eat seafood.
>> Correct!
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