05-24
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>> What is the TV program you like watching? Tell me about that program and what makes you like watching it.
Lately, I\'ve stopped watching TV programs.
Comparing with online videos, TV seem to be boring due to critical limitations, such as, stiff language regulations or parameters of materials.
Beside, user created videos are relatively free from expressions that can make audiences excited.
Once getting a taste of personal contents, it becomes hard to go back to plain media.
Thus, to make a conclusion, I don\'t have interests in any TV programs now.
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Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully.
Cheers!
Jean
>> What is the TV program you like watching? Tell me about that program and what makes you like watching it.
Lately, I\'ve stopped watching TV programs.
>> I\'ve stopped watching TV programs recently.
Comparing with online videos, TV seem to be boring due to critical limitations, such as, stiff language regulations or parameters of materials.
>> Compared with online videos, TV seems to be boring due to critical limitations, such as stiff language regulations or parameters of materials.
Beside, user created videos are relatively free from expressions that can make audiences excited.
>> Besides, user created videos are relatively free from expressions that can make the audience excited.
Once getting a taste of personal contents, it becomes hard to go back to plain media.
>> Once you get a taste of personal contents, it becomes hard to go back to plain media.
Thus, to make a conclusion, I don\'t have interests in any TV programs now.
>> In conclusion, I don\'t have any interest in any TV programs now.
Lately, I\'ve stopped watching TV programs.
>> I\'ve stopped watching TV programs recently.
Comparing with online videos, TV seem to be boring due to critical limitations, such as, stiff language regulations or parameters of materials.
>> Compared with online videos, TV seems to be boring due to critical limitations, such as stiff language regulations or parameters of materials.
Beside, user created videos are relatively free from expressions that can make audiences excited.
>> Besides, user created videos are relatively free from expressions that can make the audience excited.
Once getting a taste of personal contents, it becomes hard to go back to plain media.
>> Once you get a taste of personal contents, it becomes hard to go back to plain media.
Thus, to make a conclusion, I don\'t have interests in any TV programs now.
>> In conclusion, I don\'t have any interest in any TV programs now.
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