05-28
학생이 쓴 원문
1. step on
2. cause injury
3. when it comes to
4. keep in mind
5. within the designated
1. Everybody got shocked, because he said that it was just for stepping on her moment.
2. Some chemicals potent enough to cause serious and permanent injury.
3. When it comes to this book, this was made from the finest mahogany.
4. \'Always keep in mind, stay hydrated.\' That was his will. I still can\'t understand why did he leave that words as the will.
5. Please resister your coupon on our website within the designated date.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully.
Cheers!
Jean
1. step on2. cause injury
3. when it comes to
4. keep in mind
5. within the designated
1. Everybody got shocked, because he said that it was just for stepping on her moment.
>> Everyone was shocked when she declared that marrying the old man was just her stepping stone.[I don\'t understand the meaning of your sentence that\'s why I rephrased it.]
2. Some chemicals potent enough to cause serious and permanent injury.
>> Some chemicals are potent enough to cause serious and permanent injury.
3. When it comes to this book, this was made from the finest mahogany.
>> When it comes to this book, it was made from the finest mahogany.
4. \'Always keep in mind, stay hydrated.\' That was his will. I still can\'t understand why did he leave that words as the will.
>> ... I still can\'t understand why he left those words in his will.
5. Please resister your coupon on our website within the designated date.
>> Please register your coupon on our website within the designated date.
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