05.30 homework

2018-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What are the best and worst thing about having a big brother or a sister? Actually, I don't have any big brother or sister. I think it is helpful to do my homework with big brother. And also big sister can be a advicer to me. But I think I need not any big brother or sister. Because I really satisfy having my younger brother.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mandy :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.^^
Please check your corrections below

Actually, I don\'t have any big brother or sister.
>> Correct!

I think it is helpful to do my homework with big brother.
>>  I think it will be helpful to do my homework if I have a big brother.

And also big sister can be a advicer to me.
>>  And also if I have big sister she can be an advicer to me.

But I think I need not any big brother or sister.
>>  But I think I don\'t need any big brother or sister.

Because I really satisfy having my younger brother.
>>  Because I am really satisfy for having my younger brother with me.

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