06-05
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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1. in the future
2. illegal act
3. litter or littering
4. enthusiastic
5. earnest
1. In the future, we may have our own personal aerial transportation.
>>>> or: We may have our personal aerial transportation in the future.
2. He never knows that he committed some illegal acts during his travel.
>>>> He never knew that he committed some illegal acts during his trip.
3. When I got to his house first time, the floor was littered.
>>>> When I visited his home for the first time, the floor was littered.
4. Stan is about Eminem and his made up enthusiastic fan, named Stan.
>>>> Stan is about Eminem and his made-up enthusiastic fan, named Stan.
5. It took a lots of times that he finally embarked on the official investigation.
>>>> It took a lot of time before he finally embarked on the official investigation.
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