06-10
학생이 쓴 원문
1. lifestyle
2. including
3. in-depth
4. make it worth to
5. highly
1. The lifestyles of the rich sound fairy tales to him.
2. Including his passion to art, he was the man of the wonder.
3. Modern art require in-depth understanding on the art history, philosophy, and cultures at large.
4. His efforts to gather various evidences make it worth to believe.
5. This chemical is highly dangerous to handle by under 12 years old person alone.
강사 첨삭
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1. lifestyle
2. including
3. in-depth
4. make it worth to
5. highly
1. The lifestyles of the rich sound fairy tales to him.
>> >> The lifestyles of the rich sound like fairy tales to him.
2. Including his passion to art, he was the man of the wonder.
>>>> Setting aside his passion for art, he was a wonderful man.
3. Modern art require in-depth understanding on the art history, philosophy, and cultures at large.
>>>> Modern art requires in-depth understanding on the art history, philosophy, and cultures at large.
4. His efforts to gather various evidences make it worth to believe.
>>>> His efforts to gather various pieces of evidence make it worth his time as such were reliable.
5. This chemical is highly dangerous to handle by under 12 years old person alone.
>>>> This chemical is highly dangerous for under 12 years old persons to handle alone.
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