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2019-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. oftentimes 2. split off 3. elective 4. lack of time 5. persevere 1. He goes to gym for work-outs oftentimes, not everyday. 2. You can split off after cleaning this room up. 3. My general elective course for this semester is algebra. 4. I was extremely busy from lack of time in the projects. 5. Despite a number of setbacks, they persevered in their attempts to chase him.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. 


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. oftentimes

2. split off

3. elective

4. lack of time

5. persevere


1. He goes to gym for work-outs oftentimes, not everyday.

>>>>  He  oftentimes goes to the gym for work-outs, not everyday.


2. You can split off after cleaning this room up.

>>>> You misused the meaning of split off. 

>>>> You can separate or leave after cleaning this room up. 


3. My general elective course for this semester is algebra.

>>>> correct


4. I was extremely busy from lack of time in the projects.

>>>>  I was extremely busy since I had to take care of my projects.  

>>>>The lack of time resulted to my failure. 


5. Despite a number of setbacks, they persevered in their attempts to chase him.

>>>>Despite a number of setbacks, they persevered in their attempts to capture/catch him.

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