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2019-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> Will sexual harassment ever disappear? As far as I see, sexual harassment will stay forever. This is because the views on sexual harassment are different. Some people consider the relationship between they and the targets of harassment as intimate ,so they think it as a fun joke, and some people actually accept it as a joke. This problem is, I think, not a matter of consciousness, but a matter of justice about the extent of intimacy.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

>> Will sexual harassment ever disappear?

As far as I see, sexual harassment will stay forever.

>>>> As far as I can see, sexual harassment will never be eradicated.

This is because the views on sexual harassment are different.

>>>> correct

Some people consider the relationship between they and the targets of harassment as intimate ,so they think it as a fun joke, and some people actually accept it as a joke.

>>>> Some people consider the relationship between the offender and the targets of harassment as intimate so they think of it as a fun joke, and some people actually accept it as a joke.

This problem is, I think, not a matter of consciousness, but a matter of justice about the extent of intimacy.

>>>> correct

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