06-21
학생이 쓴 원문
1. huge cost
2. excessive use of
3. lead to dire consequences
4. physical and psychological health
5. noticeable
1. You need to reconsider your project. It will have taken huge cost.
2. She pleads guilty to excessive use of the hot line.
3. To use hard-drugs lead you to dire consequences.
4. After long wandering lives, he lost all of his physical and psychological health.
5. Her performances to mutual fund are absolutely noticeable.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
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Jean
1. huge cost
2. excessive use of
3. lead to dire consequences
4. physical and psychological health
5. noticeable
1. You need to reconsider your project. It will have taken huge cost.
>> >> You need to reconsider your project. It will have taken a huge cost by this time next year. [Be careful in using the verb tense \'will have\' because your sentence lacks enough details.]
2. She pleads guilty to excessive use of the hot line.
>>>> correct
3. To use hard-drugs lead you to dire consequences.
>>>> Using hard drugs leads to dire consequences.
4. After long wandering lives, he lost all of his physical and psychological health.
>>>> After wandering his whole life, he physical and psychological health got severely affected.
5. Her performances to mutual fund are absolutely noticeable.
>>>> I\'m not sure what this sentence is about.
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