06-26
학생이 쓴 원문
1. post their/his/her/my thoughts
2. views
3. dire
4. notifications
5. towing
1. He dared to post his thoughts about religion on Facebook.
2. She has her own unique views on social problems, and of course, those are unwelcome in our society.
3. He complained of dire abdominal pains, but nobody cared.
4. Thank you for your applying. You will have received a notification of our decision in the next week.
5. They started a towing service in our town.
강사 첨삭
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Cheers!
Jean
1. post their/his/her/my thoughts
2. views
3. dire
4. notifications
5. towing
1. He dared to post his thoughts about religion on Facebook.
>>>> He dared to post his thoughts on religion on Facebook.
2. She has her own unique views on social problems, and of course, those are unwelcome in our society.
>>>> correct
3. He complained of dire abdominal pains, but nobody cared.
>>>> He complained of severe abdominal pains, but nobody cared.
4. Thank you for your applying. You will have received a notification of our decision in the next week.
>>>> Thank you for applying. You will have received a notification of our decision by next week.
5. They started a towing service in our town.
>>>> correct
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