06-28
학생이 쓴 원문
1. go on a trip domestically
2. have time for
3. gain perspective
4. high-pressured lifestyle
5. potential
1. He will go on a trip domestically for this year\'s vacation.
2. Most of us don\'t have time for having proper lunch.
3. The Entrepreneur magazine presents \'5 Easy Ways to Gain Perspective \'.
4. His high-pressured lifestyle eventually led him to serious stress disease.
5. He was used to be a potential player before that dire accident.
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. go on a trip domestically
2. have time for
3. gain perspective
4. high-pressured lifestyle
5. potential
1. He will go on a trip domestically for this year\'s vacation.
>> correct
2. Most of us don\'t have time for having proper lunch.
>> Most of us don\'t have time to have proper lunch.
3. The Entrepreneur magazine presents \'5 Easy Ways to Gain Perspective \'.
>> correct
4. His high-pressured lifestyle eventually led him to serious stress disease.
>> His high-pressured lifestyle eventually led him to have a serious stress-related disease.
5. He was used to be a potential player before that dire accident.
>> He used to be a player with a good potential before that dire accident.
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