06Dec2024_Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: What’s one thing you’ve always wanted to learn or try, and why?
answer:
If given the chance, I would like to learn the piano. I learned the piano when I was young, but I didn’t finish. So, I’ve been looking for a piano academy, but it’s not easy to find the time.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I wish you could find time to pursue your hobbies as well. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
If given the chance, I would like to learn the piano. >>Correct!
I learned the piano when I was young, but I didn’t finish.
>>I learned the piano when I was young, but I never finished the course.
So, I’ve been looking for a piano academy, but it’s not easy to find the time.
>>So, I’ve been looking for a piano academy, but it’s not easy to find time.
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