07/10 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q) Of all countries you visited, which country had the best food?
A) My best food I ate while traveling was Hungarian goulash. Because it was the most similar to Korean food.
So, sometimes I\'m still to search where is a delicious goulash restaurant in Korea.
The Austrian schnitzel was delicious, but it was too big so I felt greasy, and the Switzerland fondue had a bad smell, so I didn\'t like it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]ho, you did a great job describing your food experiences while traveling. Your ideas are clear and interesting. There were just a few small grammar points to adjust, but your meaning came through well. Keep practicing and sharing your thoughts. I will always do my best to help you write more naturally in English.
~ T. Lia
My best food I ate while traveling was Hungarian goulash. Because it was the most similar to Korean food.
>> The best food I ate while traveling was Hungarian goulash because it was the most similar to Korean food.
So, sometimes I\'m still to search where is a delicious goulash restaurant in Korea.
>> So, sometimes I still search for a good goulash restaurant in Korea.
The Austrian schnitzel was delicious, but it was too big so I felt greasy, and the Switzerland fondue had a bad smell, so I didn\'t like it.
>> The Austrian schnitzel was delicious, but it was too big, so it felt greasy, and the Swiss fondue had a bad smell, so I didn’t like it.
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