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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How important is a college degree in your country?
Korea has the tendency to consider a college degree as the fundamental requirement for getting a job.
If someone who is not a college graduate has occupation, that person may be treated unfairly with a high probability.
Academic relations are one of the factors controling Korean society.
The only way that a man without a degree gets over these kind disadvantages in this country is showing extremely high performances.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How important is a college degree in your country?
Korea has the tendency to consider a college degree as the fundamental requirement for getting a job.
>>>>>> correct
If someone who is not a college graduate has occupation, that person may be treated unfairly with a high probability.
>>>> If someone who is not a college graduate has an occupation, it\'s with a high probability that that person may be treated unfairly.
Academic relations are one of the factors controlling Korean society.
>>>>>> correct
The only way that a man without a degree gets over these kind disadvantages in this country is showing extremely high performances.
>>>> The only way that a man without a degree gets over these kinds of disadvantages in this country is to show extremely high performances.
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