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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How important is marriage in your culture?
The idea of families has been changing rapidly in Korean culture.
The previous generations have a tendency to consider marriage as the essential of the men\'s lives.
However, the current which grips the new generations encourages people to stop rating the matrimony as the given duty.
The trends sometimes bring conflict between two different age groups, but have been growing.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How important is marriage in your culture?
The idea of families has been changing rapidly in Korean culture.
>>>> Koreans\' view on families has been changing rapidly in my culture.
The previous generations have a tendency to consider marriage as the essential of the men\'s lives.
>>>> The older generations have a tendency to consider marriage as essential in people\'s lives.
However, the current which grips the new generations encourages people to stop rating the matrimony as the given duty.
>>>> However, the current which grips the new generations encourages people to stop rating matrimony as a given duty.
The trends sometimes bring conflict between two different age groups, but have been growing.
>>>> correct
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