07-30
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> The cost of university education is becoming very expensive in many countries. How can we make the cost of education more affordable to the general public?
I really have no idea with this question.
The cost of university education cannot be adjusted by just ordinary citizens like us.
The price is determined by the market economy principle.
It is a kind of unfair trade if individuals or groups can influence it.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> The cost of university education is becoming very expensive in many countries. How can we make the cost of education more affordable to the general public?
I really have no idea with this question.
>> I really have no idea how to answer this question.
The cost of university education cannot be adjusted by just ordinary citizens like us.
>> The cost of university education cannot be adjusted only by ordinary citizens like us.
The price is determined by the market economy principle.
>> CORRECT~~
It is a kind of unfair trade if individuals or groups can influence it.
>> It is somewhat considered as unfair trade if individuals or groups can influence it.
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