07 I am~ 2018
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, there are hopes that we will be able to create a new perspective on the design work we have been experiencing in the past, and we are looking forward to experiencing and experiencing a new perspective of the culture of various countries.Despite knowing that space is not what I see but what I feel, I may have forgotten the feeling while designing the space.I need a novelty in my design method that is fixed.I think that managing design is a design. It is not the design for the design but the culture that becomes the subject, and the feeling space that can feel the culture.I have not been able to completely allow myself to be my own as I have lived in the meantime, but I hope that the end of my study life will bring about the beginning of newness.
강사 첨삭
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~T. IRENE~
In particular, the Seoul Metropolitan Government Building I experienced the design process and the construction process to make the interior space through the BIM design process and I experienced the efficient coordination with the building construction part.
>> In particular, the Seoul Metropolitan Government Building is one of those that I worked with in the design and construction process to make the interior space acceptable through the BIM design process. Moreover, I experienced the efficient coordination with the building\'s construction part.
I learned that the design is not part, it is the whole.
>> I learned that the design is not just a small part of it, it is the whole.
In recent years, it has become possible to search a lot of images and to deal with clients who have many experiences.
>> Correct.
Now, in order to complete each project, it is hard to succeed with technology in one area.
>> Now, in order to complete each project, it is hard to succeed with technology in just one area.
I have to go through a series of designing process and find a more systematic and creative way to do it.
>> I have to go through a series of designing processes and find a more systematic and creative way to do it.
I am looking forward to looking back on the project design process that has been going on and improving my ability to incorporate trends, and hopefully this is a great opportunity to look back at all the work I\'ve been doing.
>> I am looking forward to looking back at the project design process that has been going on and improve my ability to incorporate trends. Hopefully, this is a great opportunity to look back at all the work I\'ve been doing.
~T. IRENE~
In particular, the Seoul Metropolitan Government Building I experienced the design process and the construction process to make the interior space through the BIM design process and I experienced the efficient coordination with the building construction part.
>> In particular, the Seoul Metropolitan Government Building is one of those that I worked with in the design and construction process to make the interior space acceptable through the BIM design process. Moreover, I experienced the efficient coordination with the building\'s construction part.
I learned that the design is not part, it is the whole.
>> I learned that the design is not just a small part of it, it is the whole.
In recent years, it has become possible to search a lot of images and to deal with clients who have many experiences.
>> Correct.
Now, in order to complete each project, it is hard to succeed with technology in one area.
>> Now, in order to complete each project, it is hard to succeed with technology in just one area.
I have to go through a series of designing process and find a more systematic and creative way to do it.
>> I have to go through a series of designing processes and find a more systematic and creative way to do it.
I am looking forward to looking back on the project design process that has been going on and improving my ability to incorporate trends, and hopefully this is a great opportunity to look back at all the work I\'ve been doing.
>> I am looking forward to looking back at the project design process that has been going on and improve my ability to incorporate trends. Hopefully, this is a great opportunity to look back at all the work I\'ve been doing.
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