08-02
학생이 쓴 원문
Make a sentence using the words below:
1. from my perspective
2. portability or portable
3. greatly upgraded
4. compact
5. if you ask me
1. From my perspective, Frozen, the Disney movie, has some structural defects.
2. Compared to decades ago, the portability of the phone has increased dramatically.
3. After he invested millions of dollars in his car, it has been greatly upgraded.
4. Nowadays phones are compact, powerful and aesthetically outstanding.
5. If you ask me, I can\'t say that it was a good deed.
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Jean
Make a sentence using the words below:
1. from my perspective
2. portability or portable
3. greatly upgraded
4. compact
5. if you ask me
1. From my perspective, Frozen, the Disney movie, has some structural defects.
>> From my perspective, Frozen, a Disney movie, has some structural defects.
2. Compared to decades ago, the portability of the phone has increased dramatically.
>> Compared to decades ago, the portability of phones has increased dramatically.
3. After he invested millions of dollars in his car, it has been greatly upgraded.
>> correct
4. Nowadays phones are compact, powerful and aesthetically outstanding.
>> Nowadays, phones are compact, powerful, and aesthetically outstanding.
>> or: Phones are compact, powerful, and aesthetically outstanding nowadays.
5. If you ask me, I can\'t say that it was a good deed.
>> correct
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