08.02 Homework

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1. If I was given the oportunity to open up a club, I will open up a club that taking a picture.

>>>If I was given the opportunity to open up a club, I would open a photography club.

2. If I open up a photograph club, there will be many students who are interested in photograph so we can share with their tips for photograph skills and information about wonderful place to take a picture.

>>>There are a lot of students interested in photography so if I open a photography club, we can share tips in taking photos as well as their skills and information about wonderful places to take pictures of.

3. Additionally, we can have new friends sharing some hobby, so we and make new experience with them during a club activity.

>>>In addition, we can also make new friends who share the same hobby and make new experiences during club activities.

4. To maximize these strengthes, I will focus on making times that club members could talk with each other freely.

>>> To maximize these strengths, I will focus on making time for club members to talk with each other freely.

5. If there are much time to talk with each other freely, there also will be many good opinions about club activity.

>>>If they are given the chance to talk with each other freely, we can share good opinions during club activities.