08-05
학생이 쓴 원문
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What was the most stressful time of your life?
I still can remember vividly that period, when I had served in the military.
My unit was the front-line reconnaissance battalion, and the physical and mental burden was significant.
The unit was completely isolated from the outside, able to leave only two times of vacations a year.
Korean men sometimes have a strange nerve war about who have passed the worst when they take out their military stories, but even in that sense, my friends always admit I had been through the most tough army service.
Even I am still thankful that I am a civilian.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What was the most stressful time of your life?
I still can remember vividly that period, when I had served in the military.
>> correct
My unit was the front-line reconnaissance battalion, and the physical and mental burden was significant.
>> correct
The unit was completely isolated from the outside, able to leave only two times of vacations a year.
>> The unit was completely isolated from the outside, able to have only 2 vacations in a year.
Korean men sometimes have a strange nerve war about who have passed the worst when they take out their military stories, but even in that sense, my friends always admit I had been through the most tough army service.
>> Korean men sometimes have a strange habit of bragging as to who had the most difficult training or experience during their voluntary enlistment, but even in that sense, my friends always admit that I went through the toughest time.
Even I am still thankful that I am a civilian.
>> I must admit I\'m thankful that I came back safe and sound and is living as a civilian.
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