08/08 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q) Did you enjoy going to academies when you were a student?
A) No. I didn\'t like going to the academy because it was only for studying to get into university. I didn\'t want to go every day, it was boring. As you know, Korean parents have a very high desire for their children\'s education.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름] your response is clear and gives a good explanation of your feelings and reasoning. I made one small adjustment to connect your ideas more smoothly in the second sentence. Keep writing with this level of detail. It makes your answers interesting and easy to follow.
~ T. Lia
No.
>> CORRECT
I didn\'t like going to the academy because it was only for studying to get into university.
>> CORRECT
I didn\'t want to go every day, it was boring.
>> I didn\'t want to go every day because it was boring.
As you know, Korean parents have a very high desire for their children\'s education.
>> CORRECT
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