08-09
학생이 쓴 원문
>> What do you think is interesting about your culture?
As far as I can see, the most outstanding distinction from Korea between other country is that they act very friendly to others.
If they find someone in a trouble, they will gladly lend their hands without any expections of compensations, like seemimg to regard everything as their own.
This aspect even influences in the use of the personal pronoun \'we\'.
For instance, Koreans use instead of \'my house\', but \'our house\' to everyone, because they regard \'my house\' as the selfish and the unfriendly.
It works as a dominant principle of Korean culture, sometimes acts positively and sometimes negatively.
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Jean
>> What do you think is interesting about your culture?
As far as I can see, the most outstanding distinction from Korea between other country is that they act very friendly to others.
>> As far as I can see, the most outstanding distinction between Korea and other countries is that Koreans are very friendly people.
If they find someone in a trouble, they will gladly lend their hands without any expections of compensations, like seemimg to regard everything as their own.
>> If they find someone in trouble, they would gladly lend a helping hand without expecting anything in return.
This aspect even influences in the use of the personal pronoun \'we\'.
>> This aspect even influences the usage of the personal pronoun \'we\'.
For instance, Koreans use instead of \'my house\', but \'our house\' to everyone, because they regard \'my house\' as the selfish and the unfriendly.
>> For instance, Koreans use \'our house\' instead of \'my house\' because they regard the latter as being selfish and unfriendly.
It works as a dominant principle of Korean culture, sometimes acts positively and sometimes negatively.
>> It works as a dominant principle of Korean culture, having both positive and negative effects.
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