08-20
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How important do you think folklore is in defining cultural identity?
Most of folklore are based on their cultural circumstance.
For instance, Korea has shamanism which is built on mountains, matriarchy, wild animals and household goods.
This combination renders the clue to assume ancient Korean\'s lives.
Thus, to define cultural identity, it is necessary to investigate on folklore.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> How important do you think folklore is in defining cultural identity?
Most of folklore are based on their cultural circumstance.
>> Most folklore are based on the cultural circumstances of the place.
For instance, Korea has shamanism which is built on mountains, matriarchy, wild animals and household goods.
>> For instance, Korea has shamanism, which is built on mountains, matriarchy, wild animals, and household goods.
This combination renders the clue to assume ancient Korean\'s lives.
>> correct
Thus, to define cultural identity, it is necessary to investigate on folklore.
>> or: Thus, to define cultural identity, it is necessary to research on folklore.
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