08-23
학생이 쓴 원문
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me about a health problem that you or a person close to you has/had.
My maternal grandmother had dementia, but it was miraculously cured.
However since that moment, her health began to deteriorate rapidly, and she began not to recognize even her daughter.
Last month, I visited her who was in the countryside nursing home.
Meeting again after a few years, I could hardly find my grandmother on her, who I know, because she looked gaunt and emaciated.
One clear day, not long after that, she went to the Lord where she had believed over entire her life.
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Jean
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me about a health problem that you or a person close to you has/had.
My maternal grandmother had dementia, but it was miraculously cured.
>> correct
However, since that moment, her health began to deteriorate rapidly, and she began not to recognize even her daughter.
>> correct
Last month, I visited her who was in the countryside nursing home.
>> Last month, I visited her in the countryside nursing home where she was staying.
Meeting again after a few years, I could hardly find my grandmother on her, who I know, because she looked gaunt and emaciated.
>> correct
One clear day, not long after that, she went to the Lord where she had believed over entire her life.
>> One clear day, not long after that, she went to the Lord who she had believed in in her entire life.
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