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2019-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below: >> Tell me about a health problem that you or a person close to you has/had. What are/were the symptoms? How are/were you or the other person getting over it? I had plantar fasciitis on my feet when I had served in the army. The representative symptom of plantar fasciitis is serious intramuscular pain on the bottom of feet. That condition is classified as a mild disease and doesn\'t require particular therapies. So, I took a rest for a while to cure it.

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Jean


In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me about a health problem that you or a person close to you has/had.
What are/were the symptoms? How are/were you or the other person getting over it?

I had plantar fasciitis on my feet when I had served in the army.
>> correct

The representative symptom of plantar fasciitis is serious intramuscular pain on the bottom of feet.
>> The major symptom of plantar fasciitis is a serious intramuscular pain at the bottom of feet.

That condition is classified as a mild disease and doesn\'t require particular therapies.
>> That condition is classified as a mild disease and doesn\'t require a particular therapy.

So, I took a rest for a while to cure it.
>> correct

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