08.29.2022
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Have a whale of a time
2. Throw a party
3. Birthday bash
We celebrate 70th birthday especially in Korea.
We invite friends, neighbor and relatives to throw a party.
During the birthday bash, every participant have a whale of a time.
강사 첨삭
I couldn\'t be prouder, Alice! You used the expressions appropriately. Thank you!-Faith-
1. Have a whale of a time>> CORRECT
2. Throw a party
2. Throw a party
>> CORRECT
3. Birthday bash
>> CORRECT
We celebrate 70th birthday especially in Korea.
3. Birthday bash
>> CORRECT
We celebrate 70th birthday especially in Korea.
>> We celebrate our 70th birthday especially in Korea.
OR Koreans celebrate their 70 birthday in a special way.
We invite friends, neighbor and relatives to throw a party.
We invite friends, neighbor and relatives to throw a party.
>> We invite our friends, neighbors and relatives to throw a party.
During the birthday bash, every participant have a whale of a time.
During the birthday bash, every participant have a whale of a time.
>> During the birthday bash, every participant has a whale of a time.
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