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2015-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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ESSAY: What is the most important thing that we need to teach children? Why? Using correct and lovely words towards them is the most important when we teach children. I dont want to talk about my affairs over here precisely, but since the question is related to my case, I'm going to talk about my occasion brifely. I went through alot of teachers during my whole school years. I didnt have any luck to meet any single teacher i can respect only at school. Once, I asked some questions to my homeroom teacher who taught politics. He laughed at me inwardly since i asked questions about class. Can you believe it? Speakers might easily forget what they said, but not listeners. It remains forever. So i think to taking care of a single word when you treat children who are very vulnerable and pay attention to what you say.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your experience and your ideas on how we should treat children. Have a good day! ~Kelly^^ ESSAY: What is the most important thing that we need to teach children? Why?Using correct and lovely words towards them is the most important when we teach children. >> Using nice and lovely words is the most important way to teach children.   I dont want to talk about my affairs over here precisely, but since the question is related to my case, I\'m going to talk about my occasion brifely. >> I dont want to talk about my affairs over here precisely, but since the question is related to my case, I\'m going to talk about my experiences briefly. I went through a lot of teachers during my whole school years. >> I met a lot of teachers during my school years. I didnt have any luck to meet any single teacher i can respect only at school. >> I didnt have any luck to meet a single teacher that I could respect at school. Once, I asked some questions to my homeroom teacher who taught politics. >> Correct. He laughed at me inwardly since i asked questions about class. >> He laughed at me inwardly since I asked questions about our class. Can you believe it? >> Correct. Speakers might easily forget what they said, but not listeners. >> Speakers might easily forget what they said, but not their listeners. It remains forever. >> It remains in them forever. So i think to taking care of a single word when you treat children who are very vulnerable and pay attention to what you say. >> So I think that you have to treat children nicely who are very vulnerable and pay attention to what you say to them.

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