0814 homework
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What are the Korean products that you think should be exported?
I want to introduce the Korean product 'self camara stick'. It is popular in the Korea. It makes you take your picture easily. Let me tell you how to use it. First, put your camera at the end of stick. And then make your stick longer. This stick can be 1 meter. Hold on one side of the stick, you can see the camara that on the other side. So, if you spread your arm straight, distance between you and your camera will be more then 1 meter 50 centimeter. Without any others help, you can take your picture with landscape!
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your homework.
Do you also like taking pictures?
I think this product is already famous in your country and even in other countries.
Anyway, please review my corrections.
~KeLLy~
What are the Korean products that you think should be exported?I want to introduce the Korean product \'self camara stick\'.
>> Correct.*** camera
It is popular in the Korea.
>> It is popular in Korea.
It makes you take your picture easily.
>> Correct.Let me tell you how to use it.
>> Correct
First, put your camera at the end of stick.
>> Firstly, put your camera at the end of the stick.
And then make your stick longer.
>> And then you can adjust the length of the stick depending on your preference.
This stick can be 1 meter.
>> This stick measures 1 meter.
Hold on one side of the stick, you can see the camara that on the other side.
>> Hold on to one side of the stick, then you can see the camera on the other side.
So, if you spread your arm straight, distance between you and your camera will be more then 1 meter 50 centimeter.
>> So, if you spread your arm straight, the distance between you and your camera will be more then 1 meter and 50 centimeters.
Without any others help, you can take your picture with landscape!
>> Without other people\'s help, you can take a picture with landscape.
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