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Are you familiar with Mixed Martial Arts or MMA? Is MMA popular in your country?
I am not familiar with Mixed Matrial Arts. When I first read today's topic, I have to seach on the internet. I first thought MMA is one kind of the modern art. But after I search on the internet, I realize it is fighting with any kind of martial arts.
MMA is popular in our country , mostly men and boys like it to watch it. However, I don't like watching fighting, especially MMA. MMA is so radical and looks very dangerous. I don't like watching people hurt. So I never watched MMA. I only know some of famous players. I saw them on the other television programs.
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Are you familiar with Mixed Martial Arts or MMA? Is MMA popular in your country?I am not familiar with Mixed Matrial Arts.
>> Correct.
When I first read today\'s topic, I have to seach on the internet.
>> When I first read today\'s topic, I had to seach on the internet.
I first thought MMA is one kind of the modern art.
>> I first thought of MMA as a kind of modern art.
But after I search on the internet, I realize it is fighting with any kind of martial arts. >> But after I searched on the internet, I found out that it is a kind of martial arts.
MMA is popular in our country , mostly men and boys like it to watch it.
>> MMA is popular in our country. Most men like to watch it.
However, I don\'t like watching fighting, especially MMA.
>> However, I don\'t like watching fighting games, especially MMA.
MMA is so radical and looks very dangerous.
>> MMA is so radical and it looks very dangerous.
I don\'t like watching people hurt.
>> I don\'t like watching people get hurt.
So I never watched MMA.
>> Correct.
I only know some of famous players.
>> I only know some famous MMA players.
I saw them on the other television programs.
>> I saw them in a television program.
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