09-02
학생이 쓴 원문
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me about the funniest and most impressive soap opera you have watched. Why is it impressive for you?
The most impressive soap opera I have watched is \'Beethoven Virus\'.
It is the story of a sloppily organized orchestra and the world\'s famous conductor.
Of course it contains childish blind loves and modernized heroic tales but musics are authentic.
The show made me interested in classical musics.
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Jean
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me about the funniest and most impressive soap opera you have watched. Why is it impressive for you?
The most impressive soap opera I have watched is \'Beethoven Virus\'.
>> correct
It is the story of a sloppily organized orchestra and the world\'s famous conductor.
>> correct
Of course it contains childish blind loves and modernized heroic tales but musics are authentic.
>> Of course, it contains childish blind loves and modernized heroic tales but the music pieces are authentic.
The show made me interested in classical musics.
>> The show made me interested in classical music.
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