09/17
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]!
Your name is really nice in the ears.^^
Thank you for your note. You are good in expressing yourself thru writing. Good job!
You are using deep words correctly though sometimes you also use some words incorrectly. But over all you did well. Keep on improving your vocabulary. I think it is one of your strength.
See you later [이름]!^^
-T.Naomi
Good morning, my teacher~!!
>>Good morning, my teacher!
I\'m in my office and writing my homework before beginning my work as I mentioned last lesson.
>>I\'m in my office and I am currently writing a note before my work begins as I mentioned last class. ( lesson is the topic. For example our lesson yesterday was about car and our lesson for today is about religion)
As you know, I was driving a rented car yesterday so it was actually dangerous while getting my lesson. ^^;;
>>As you know, I was driving a rented car yesterday, so it was actually dangerous while having my class. ^^;;
Nevertheless, I love our lesson so I got your call and did my best.
>>correct
Even if I passed my destination because of my lesson, I reached the destination without any delay. More specifically, it was perfect.
>>I reached my destination without any delay, even if I had my class. Specifically, it was perfect.
I omitted my last homework two times so I will make my homework as soon as possible.
>>correct
Thus, I ask you to review my homework and revise any errors after completing omitted homework.
>>Thus, I ask you to review my homework and revise any errors after completing my omitted homework.
I should get back to my work.
>>correct
Have a nice day. See you.
>>correct
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