09/19
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! TGIF
After reading this note of yours, I thought that you are such an out-going person and now I know your schedule.
I am very to say that I can\'t remember anything about our previous class. Sorry
But it is nice to know that. Thank you.
And yes, I like hiking, trekking, walking, wandering around with nowhere to go. Maybe it is also because of a sense of well-being.
For indoor activity, I am really amused with chess.
Puwajjaja!^^
Nice talking you [이름]! See on Monday and take care!
-T.Naomi
Hi, there.
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How was it today?
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Was it happy or gloomy??
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To me, everyday is same day. Everyday is filled with many things to do. There is not the end. Don\'t you think it is strange?
>>To me, everyday is the same day. Everyday is filled with many things to do. There is no end. Don\'t you think it is strange?
I am in the train to go to see my family. I am not sure that you know my schedule on Friday.
>>I am in the train to see my family. I am not sure that you know my schedule on Friday.
I always take a train on Friday for meeting my family. Maybe I talked about that when we do our class several months ago.^^
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Oh my god!! I heard that a typoon was occures in the ocean and is proceeding to my country.
>>Oh my God! I heard that a typhoon has occurred in the ocean and is proceeding to my country.
It is a bad new to us because Asian game is held in Korea now.
>>It is a bad news to us because the Asian Game is going to be hold in Korea now.
Do you enjoy any game which can do outside and enhance our wellbeing?? ^^~
>>Do you enjoy any game which can be done outside and enhance our well being? ^^~
I love every sports that we can enjoy it indoors and even outdoors.
>>I love every sports that we can enjoy indoors and even outdoors.
Ooops. . It is almost my class time so I shold go to the lobby of this train for answering your call. .
>>Ooops! It is almost my class time so I should go to the lobby of this train for answering your call.
See you in 4 minutes.
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Bye~~.
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