09.24 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Either answer is acceptable.
2. Every one of those books are fiction.
3. Nobody knows the trouble I've seen.
4. Is the news on at five or six?
5. Mathematics is John's favorite subject, while Civics is Andrea's favorite subject.
I also enjoyed with your call.
Now, I'm dying my hair with dark brown.
because I have no class today!!
So, after my hair is done, I'm going to have a great lunch with my friends and study together.
We are planing to eat Bu-dae-jji-gae, which is simular with Kimchi-soup.
It is spicy but tastes good.
I hope you taste it, if you come to Korea next time.
And then, at 7 o'clock I have a birth day party for one of my friends.
But sadly, I have to go to the lab for my report....
I'm so sad...... T.T
Anyway, See u tommorraw :)
at the
강사 첨삭
Thank you for submitting your homework today.
I bet you will look good more after grooming your hair.
Enjoy your time with your friends! I really hope I can taste that food someday.
It\'s really sad that you cannot attend your friend\'s birthday party because of your report.
Maybe you can do it quick and can still attend after you finished it, right?
See you!
~T. Nica~
Here are my corrections:
1. Either answer is acceptable.
>>>CORRECT!2. Everyone of those books are fiction.
>>>is3. Nobody knows the trouble I\'ve seen.
>>>CORRECT!4. Is the news on at five or six?
>>>CORRECT!5. Mathematics is John\'s favorite subject, while Civics is Andrea\'s favorite subject. >>>CORRECT!I also enjoyed with your call.>>>I also enjoyed your call.Now, I\'m dying my hair with dark brown.>>>CORRECT!because I have no class today!! >>>CORRECT!
****Just capitalize the first letter of the sentence (Because).***So, after my hair is done, I\'m going to have a great lunch with my friends and study together.>>>CORRECT!We are planing to eat Bu-dae-jji-gae, which is similar with Kimchi-soup.>>>CORRECT!It is spicy but tastes good. >>>CORRECT!
>>>It is spicy but it tastes good for me.I hope you taste it, if you come to Korea next time.>>>I hope you can be able to taste it when you happen to visit Korea in the future.And then, at 7 o\'clock I have a birth day party for one of my friends.>>>And then at 7 o\'clock, it\'s the birthday party of one of my friends.But sadly, I have to go to the lab for my report....>>>CORRECT!
>>>Unfortunately, I cannot attend because I have to go to the lab for my report.I\'m so sad...... T.T>>>CORRECT! :(Anyway, See u tommorraw :)>>>Anyway, I\'ll see you tomorrow! :)
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