09-25
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What is the most romantic proposal you can think of and why?
Romantic proposals are intense wits battles and nerve wars.
It should not be too excessive, too empty, too open, too private or too obvious.
To survive in such a battlefield, you must be in the position of a recipient.
Thus, for me, the most romantic proposal is the proposal I receive.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What is the most romantic proposal you can think of and why?
>> What is the most romantic proposal you can think of and why?
Romantic proposals are intense wits battles and nerve wars.
>> or: Romantic proposals are all about intense wits battles and nerve wars.
It should not be too excessive, too empty, too open, too private or too obvious.
>> correct
To survive in such a battlefield, you must be in the position of a recipient.
>> correct
Thus, for me, the most romantic proposal is the proposal I receive.
>> Thus, for me, the most romantic proposal is the proposal I would receive.
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