09-26
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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What is the main health problem that your country is currently facing?
The main issue of health of Korean nowadays is depression.
The social structure of this country is standing on sacrifices and exploitation of the lower 90%.
This structural flaw is causing people to develop depression.
The state is trying to resolve people\'s mental illness, but has not touched the fundamental problems.
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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What is the main health problem that your country is currently facing?
The main issue of health of Korean nowadays is depression.
>> The main health issue of Koreans nowadays is depression.
The social structure of this country is standing on sacrifices and exploitation of the lower 90%.
>> correct
This structural flaw is causing people to develop depression.
>> correct
The state is trying to resolve people\'s mental illness, but has not touched the fundamental problems.
>> The state is trying to resolve people\'s mental illness but has not touched the fundamental problems.
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