09/29
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Have a safe trip and come back safe and sound.
I am the one who check your homework.
About your maxim, honestly I didn\'t get it but when you explained it. It was nice.
And it has a good purpose, do you mean not to compete but to cooperate with each other?
Thank you!
Have a relaxing holiday too.
-T.Naomi
Hello, there??
>>Hello, there?
It\'s a happy Tuesday because the air was cool and clean for breathing in when commuting.
>>It\'s a happy Tuesday because the air was cool and clean for breathing when commuting.
>>OR: It\'s a happy Tuesday because the air was cool and clean to breathe in when commuting.
I will go on a business trip today as I said yesterday.
>>correct
I\'not sure and didn\'t inquire about who reviews my homework. ^^;;
>>correct
Anyway, I\'m doing my homework.
>>correct
My maxim is \'the life going behind\' Is this sentense right grammatically ??
>>My maxim is \"the life going behind\", Is this sentence grammaticalli right?
>>NOTE: Some maxims are grammatically wrong. kkk
If you don\'t understand, you can get it while seeing my explanation as belows.
>>If you don\'t understand, you can get it while seeing my explanation as follows.
>>OR: If you don\'t understand, you can get it while seeing my explanation below.
I saw this sentence when I was a student in the university.
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And it made me feeling many thing even if I can\'t explain about all.
>>And it made me realize many things even if I can\'t explain about all.
>>It gave me an odd feeling about a lot of things that I can\'t explain.
As you know, most people ask to get their right and happiness. Nevertheless, all people who want to be happy couldn\'t get their owns.
>>As you know, most people claim their right and happiness. Nevertheless, all people who want to be happy couldn\'t have their own.
So we should set our right aside for others and back down.
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I think it is more important at our working place.
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When we are doing some works with others or other teams, our project will conduct smoothly if we back down each other. And we will get our common goal, won\'t not?
>>When we are doing some works with others or other teams, our project will be conducted smoothly if we back down to each other. And we will get our common goal, won\'t we?
See you in our class. Bye.
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