09Apr2025-homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: What courses or subjects do you think should be added in school?
Answer:
I need to financial literacy, this course personal finance management, budgeting, and the basics of investing.
It would help them make informed economic decisions as adults.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! You\'re absolutely right! Adding financial literacy courses to school curricula can have a huge impact on students\' ability to manage their money wisely as adults.
-T. Sonny
I need to financial literacy, this course personal finance management, budgeting, and the basics of investing.>>I need financial literacy, specifically in personal finance management, budgeting, and the basics of investing.
It would help them make informed economic decisions as adults.
It would help them make informed economic decisions as adults.
>>It would help me make informed economic decisions as an adult.
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