09Dec2024_Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: How do you feel when you drink too much coffee?
answer:
I drink about 4 shots of coffee a day, and I feel that coffee gives me a lot of energy and improves my concentration.
However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, my heart starts pounding, and I can\'t sleep.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I get the same feeling when I drink too much coffee in a day. Although, I can still sleep soundly even after them.
-T. Sonny
I drink about 4 shots of coffee a day, and I feel that coffee gives me a lot of energy and improves my concentration.>>Correct!
OR. I consume roughly 4 shots of coffee daily, and I find that it boosts my energy and enhances my focus.
However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, my heart starts pounding, and I can\'t sleep.
However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, my heart starts pounding, and I can\'t sleep.
>>Correct!
OR. However, sometimes when I have more than 4 shots, I get palpitations and it\'s difficult to fall asleep.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.