1- The reason why children should be supervised when using internet

Hi there^^

Thank you for doing your homework^^

I\'m sorry about our class this morning.

Anyway, you did great explaining your opinions. I totally agree with you! There are a lot of violent and obscene contents online and the children should be supervised. Let\'s talk more about this in our class tomorrow. Have a great day and take care^^

~T.Chelsea

The saying that world has become global village is not partly but now entirely true; due to internet.

>> The saying that world has become a global village is not partly but now entirely true due to internet.

Since the length of time and distance to share news through internet has largely decreased, people in the world may feel living nearby together.

>> Since the length of time and distance to share news through internet has largely decreased, people in the world may feel they live nearby. 

In modern society, anyone who can connect the internet is able to get the information with just a few clicks.

>> In modern society, anyone who can connect to the internet will be able to get information with just a few clicks.
However, not everyone is allowed to use the internet without supervision.

>> CORRECT!
Especially children should be strictly controlled in light of education.

>> Especially children, they should be strictly controlled in light of education.

There are two main reasons below.
>> CORRECT!
First, it is harmful for children to access to violent and obscene online contents.

>> First, it is harmful for children to access violent and obscene contents online.

The contents are likely to have them distorting their value on the world they live in and cause serious mental problems.

>> CORRECT!

It is because children in growth are mentally immature.

>> It is because children who are growing are mentally immature.

Therefore, they should be guided and protected in order to explore websites in a right and sound way.

>> CORRECT!