1-07
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. from my perspective
2. as far as I\'m concerned
3. it seems to me
4. from where I\'m standing
5. demand
1. I don\'t want to hurt your feeling but sweety, from my perspective, it is going wrong.
>> I don\'t want to hurt your feelings but sweety, from my perspective, everything is going wrong.
2. As far as I\'m concerned, something that is going wrong in here is you, \"sweety\".
>> As far as I\'m concerned, you\'re the cause of these incidents.
3. It seems to me, you know, I\'m a chef and you are not, it was supposed to be beautiful brown not dark black.
>> It seems to me that I\' m the chef and you aren\'t. It was supposed to be beautiful brown not dark black.
4. From where I\'m standing, you must visit your ophthalmologist, \"Ms.chef\".
>> From where I\'m standing, you must visit your ophthalmologist, \"Ms. [Name].\"
5. Oh my days! What is going on! Shame on you girls! My demand was ridiculously simple. Be nice to each other.
>> correct, but for your information, \"Oh my days\" is mainly used by people, especially the religious ones, who consider \"Oh my God\" as blasphemous. If someone isn\'t really devout Christian, it\'s more natural to use \"oh my God.\"
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